Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Ju's Speech Evaluation

My speech was on the difference between the French and the English.
I think it was pretty good because I put lots of effort into it and lots of people liked it. Next time I would try to talk slower because my speech was way to far under the time limit and some people couldn't hear what I was saying. I think that it was okay but I also think that I should've practised more.

Wednesday, September 12, 2007

My Term 3 goals, family feedback

Guitar practise:
My mum doesn't think I have achieved this goal and that I should try harder.

Hockey practise:
My family think that I haven't achieved this goal but it is hard because my Dad is normally busy at work.

Organisation:
My family think I have achieved this goal because my room has been a lot tidier and I am not losing as many things as I used to.

Monday, September 10, 2007

Answers to questons on team 14 blog.

1. Global warming. (http://www.green.tv/)
2. To tell people what is happening and that we need to take action soon. It was also telling you to make your own video about what you think of global warming.
3. It is telling us what is happening and what they fear might happen if global warming continues.
4. What is the main cause of global warming? How can we help? We could use this information by warning other people.

Speech Feedback Term 3 - The difference between the French and English

2.25 Your introduction grabbed our attention with a rhetorical question. You spoke quite quickly, but it was clear and loud enough to hear. You gave a number of interesting examples, which were shared as stories. You showed you can use OPV by looking at more than one viewpoint when giving examples. You also used French words which made it more interesting.

Next Steps:
Practise the speech with a small group more so that you slow down a lot. Relax and enjoy yourself, you are a talented writer and speaker!